This poem was great. Thank you for sharing. I know the feeling all to well and not being able to sleep. Sleepless nights leave you stuck in your thoughts. For me it is thoughts that are unwanted and things I cannot control that come to mind. They eat at me and make me start worrying about everything and anything. Thank you again for sharing
I enjoyed this. We all have demons that we have to fight away. I know I have to on a daily basis. The voices get so loud sometimes, and it is hard for me to ignore them. Always remember that they can't take over unless you let them. Sometimes you have to talk to them and tell them to let you be. Otherwise, if you let them in than they will make your life a living nightmare. I am only saying from experience and trust me it is no fun. I have almost given up on myself several times. I suffer from schizoaffective bipolar disorder, so I know the feeling. That is why I write the things I do to help people out to make sure that they aren't alone in this world. Dealing with your own demons can be extremely hard at times and can be really scary as well. I did enjoy this, and it says a lot about you as a person and the life experiences that you go through day to day. I am not sure if you have mental health issues, but it seems like you deal with a lot of sorrow and hurt in your life. Take it easy and go day to day and a lot of positive self-talk can be helpful as well. The best way to fight them of is by using sugar instead of spice. Let them know that you do not fear them and that they aren't going to get in at any time. Keep writing because this was wonderful, and I enjoyed it very much so. I have written on a lot of subjects, and I plan on sharing them on here. I believe that we can learn a lot from other people and know that we aren't alone and we all go through hardships in our lives one way or another. Keep your chin up and keep holding on.
I really loved this piece. I love how you explained how the feeling of love never goes away no matter how painful it can be at times. This piece shows real love for one and also shows that you are true and are willing to wait for that person. Sometimes in life we have to give those we love their space so that way they can figure out what they want, and it can be really hard on us as humans, but it gives the other person a chance to really see what is good for them. Love can be hard at times and painful like I said but in the end the person normally finds their way back to you. That is just what I got from this piece. Thank you so much for sharing. You did an amazing job and I hope you continue to write. Thank you again.
This piece is really good. I really like how the man on the bench described that things and people change in life and that you can always better yourself for the good. I see that Zues was impressed by what the man had to say and didn't get discouraged. Finding himself starting a new chapter in his life and becoming a better god by helping instead of scaring or intimidating others. I really enjoyed reading your writing. I think that you have a great insight to a lot and have to offer a lot to others as well keep up the great work.
I like this a lot. I liked how there was a human skull bound to the machine and when you spoke the skull lite up. That is awesome as I love anything to do with skulls. I also like the last part about using the ladder to climb down into the well to find the treasure that the dad left behind. To me that means that the dad was thinking of his kids and making sure that they are able to live on with no hardship in life. The hiding of the treasure was the best thing that the dad could have done as to make it so no one else was able to steal the treasure and leave the kids with nothing and no way to survive. Just a little something that I picked up from this piece. It was written really well and I enjoyed reading it. I love to see how peoples minds work and the insight that they have to life itself.
This is an amazing piece. i love how you could imagine everything you were saying. It is a heart filled piece and just beautiful. keep up the good work.
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