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Review of The Dream Door  Open in new Window.
Review by MissJeanie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem is very sweet. It reminds me of my children when they were young.
I remember the occasional nightmares and having to reassure their little minds that everything would be ok.

Soon he drifted off and as I left the room,
(I thought of my promise and hoped it would keep.) me too! lol
The darkness of night faded with the sun's bloom.
A new day was dawning but I still needed sleep!


I think this poem has nice rhyme, flow, and great imagery.

Thank you for sharing.
missjeanie
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Review of Whisper  Open in new Window.
Review by MissJeanie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
One of my favorite types of poetry.
I feel you have done a fine with this. Very nice imagery, rythm and flow.
Thank you for sharing.
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Review of Dearest Friend  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A beautiful letter to your friend. It was very heartfelt to this reader. I'm sure your friend enjoyed receiving this.
There are a couple of places that could stand correction. ( momnets) moments
( and am) eternally greatful ..... I am eternally
I will do all (thats) that's

A proof read and some corrections are all that is needed.
Great job!
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Review by MissJeanie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
first chapter:
I was the first to hear Joshua, but he wasn’t talking. The slight echo of muffled sobs climbed from the basement. This is bad, real bad, I thought to myself.
( ((( I knew Shady and Shadow then heard Joshua as their eyes widened with fear. ??)))) ????? Different wording is needed here.

There are several spots throughout your story that have missing words.
A proof read would be good.


Imagery was good!

It’s a cute children’s story. Good luck with publication.
Nice work
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Review by MissJeanie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
A remarkable piece you have written here. It blew me away! You are a very gifted writer.
Have you tried submitting this for publication? You have sent forth a very strong message, and I think it would appeal to anyone who has faith.
Thank you for sharing this personal part of your life. I could feel your pain. I will pray for you.
God bless you and your son.
Keep writing!
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Review of Maxwell's Field  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I enjoyed your story. It was very easy to follow. The imagery was very good. I wish it were longer.
I feel bad for Maxwell’s neighbor.
Keep writing!
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