This was so beautiful. I enjoyed every bit of it. I like how he was nervous at first about having her around him, and then he toward the end, he told her that she couldn't kiss him and then he kissed her back. I love the way that it is wrote too. It just has a way with words and the whole topic was amazing. Great work! I would love to read some more of it.
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