WOW. This is a great story! The ending was such a twist!! I love the way you write!! I think Minky's character is perfect for the story, and you clearly thought about every detail. I really enjoyed it and will look forward to reading more of your work!! Keep writing!!! :D xxxxx
WOW. I was gripped the whole way through. It is a truly brilliant idea!! Seriously!! You are a genius!! I actually cannot describe how amazing this idea is!! It was so good that i'm going to re-read it!! (Which will take me ageeesss because I read quite slow and its really long!) :D
I think it's a pretty good story. I love the 'god damn pothole' bit. It made me laugh! Overall, I think it's a great idea, and if you made it a bit longer, it would be even better! I also love the 'hangover banging at his brain like a cast iron pan in the hands of his angry wife' !!!! Keep writing!! :D
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