This is simply amazing. I absolutely love the title.
Thank you for sharing such a personal experience.
It's important to continue to use writing as a positive outlet for your emotions through this struggle.
Trust me, I know ;)
For once those pills pass through my lips,
Shame and regret are but tiny blips.
This is just another one my trips.
An ode to the darker side of life.
It's important to get your point across in a way that's easy to relate to, and this is something you do extremely well.
"I'm already dead," she whispered with a sigh.
She spoke in a tone that would make angels cry.
A history of abuse, neglect, perhaps even some attachment issues with relationships -there is no doubt that the pain behind these words runs deep. However, this is a wounded warrior piece. What I mean by that is, despite the struggle, there still lies a spark- a fire within the author. The fire to overcome the struggle. The determination to understand oneself spiritually, emotionally. Never giving up, never letting go of hope. Perhaps the result of a breakthrough in a personal depression. As a reader, I feel empowered. This piece inspires.
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