I laughed a few times throughout this story. Great turn on cupid i love it. Very creative and full of detail. The ending is priceless. It makes me think of how many relationships go through cheating get reconciled and actully end up happy. Most of the time though women arent that forgiving. We might be if we were immortal. I dont think i could hold a grudge for four hundred years. :) great story.
Wow. This is a very powerful piece. In a few short lines it has taken my breathe. The words and subtle ryme are perfect. A great image of a journey to adulthood.
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