This is like Christmas and Birthday and everything else together You have no idea how much fun I had reading the last hour. I am just half way through and wanted to read the 2nd half tomorrow, have to sleep he, but so far it's just amazing. I wouldn't even know where to start talking about, so much to read, so many awesome twists and events. I loved the Pec pulverized ending, imagined what if Tyler had made some exercises on his hands and feet with his butt lowering down and moving up his torso and tummy, and then by some accident loosing balance and his spandex butt ramming hard reducing Josh into a tiny blob hehe The Lost in Bobby ending was breathtaking, so amazing idea of the phone call happening during Bobby haltering the spoon in mid air while this ironic conversation happens and Josh listens to every word even can hear Tyler on the other end, LOVED IT! It's my favorite part now of the whole plot So mayne ending ideas I already have and plot ideas, I loved the two bullies from the football team, could see them totally exterminating some pesky bug while some party happens or even worse, they becoming friends with Bobby somehow Bobby taking speak in behalf of them, hey their just cool dudes and give them a chance, maybe you should apologize to walking into the dude, even meant it in a totally kind way, leading to they just not walk past them but walk "over" Josh by stepping on an ant, dude you have bugs in your room, gross... oops. This story is so amazing already, loving every single bit of it so far
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You have no idea how much fun I had reading the last hour. I am just half way through and wanted to read the 2nd half tomorrow, have to sleep he, but so far it's just amazing. I wouldn't even know where to start talking about, so much to read, so many awesome twists and events. I loved the Pec pulverized ending, imagined what if Tyler had made some exercises on his hands and feet with his butt lowering down and moving up his torso and tummy, and then by some accident loosing balance and his spandex butt ramming hard reducing Josh into a tiny blob hehe The Lost in Bobby ending was breathtaking, so amazing idea of the phone call happening during Bobby haltering the spoon in mid air while this ironic conversation happens and Josh listens to every word even can hear Tyler on the other end, LOVED IT! It's my favorite part now of the whole plot