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Review of Fast is Fast  Open in new Window.
Review by Francille_em81 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good riddance to King Jotto. :D

I love fairy tales and I think this one's unique, quite funny too. I enjoyed the read.

I really think you write very well and I've no suggestions as to the way the story was written. However, I feel that you can still improve this line: ...because he did so much so much quicker than the other elves could.

Over-all I think the story's great. Good luck.
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Review by Francille_em81 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I think this is really good *Smile*
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