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Rated: E | (4.5)
As a former teacher, I love this poem. I love running into former students. I can see this scenario, this reunion of pupil and teacher. I Good example of showing versus telling. have to rate this high. Excellent work!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Are these your wedding vows? If not they should be. I noticed with a little humor that Kimberly had more to say than John. I find it hard to critique something so sweet as these words between two people who love each other. You expressed what love is so well in this piece. Keep writing.
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