Really interesting story. I look forward to reading more. I really like how you brought the characters to life and gave them emotions. The title was what caught my eye first and enticed me to read this story. You have done a lovely job with this story and I didn't find anything to suggest making changes to. Keep up the Good work.
M.E. Starr
This was a good, honest opinion of how a man might feel upon learning that not only had he impregnated a woman, but that she intended to get an abortion whether he wanted her to get one or not. I believe a person has the right to choose, but I also don't believe it is right to take a life, and could never see myself going that route. I feel that in cases such as this, an abortion shouldn't be allowed without the consent of both parties. Though if the father refuses to take responsibility for the child after refusing an abortion, then he needs to be held accountable. There are always other options. I really liked this story. It drives home not only the idea of taking responsibility for one's actions, but also shows how someone can fell helpless when they are not allowed the choice.
Keep up the good work,
M.E. Starr
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