I love learning about new poem forms. Thank you for explaining this.
I read the explanation after I read the poem. The poem was so easy to read. It just flowed right along. At first, I wondered if it was Native American inspired.
I see Psalm 23 in it. Thank you for sharing this. It was a joy to read.
This is so well written. By the time I got to the second scenario, I had forgotten what the title was and was so engrossed in the story. I was so relieved to find the outcome of being under water. What a pleasure to find that it was just a dream.
This flows so well. It read so easily. I found no spelling or grammar errors to break the flow.
The concepts are very thought provoking and I agree with all you have to say. Sometimes, it is hard to let go of a friendship you really want. But, if you do, you never know who is just right around the corner.
I must admit that I knew what the outcome of the shrimp would be. I have had salt water tanks in the past and look forward to another one very soon. They are such a joy.
How wonderfully you wove the the wonder of the shrimp into letting us know that better times are coming for those of us who believe in Jesus.
It is nice and short and to the point - a good thing for those with not much time for reading.
How wonderful. This flows so well even though it is about several different people. It held my interst as I wanted to know more and more about your wonderful family. They show so much courage.
I found no spelling or punctuation errors and was such a joy to read.
Oh, what a tease. I have been thinking all day long of ordering some chocolate and then I found this. Now, I am sunk. I will be ordering just as soon as I am through with this.
This was such fun to read. I could taste each piece as she bit into it.It is very well written and easy to read.
Thank you for sharing it. now, I am off to the See's Candy site. LOL
Oh, Ann, thank you for reminding us of this. I am finding it quite late. We need to never forget these people and their families. Thank you for your concern coming from another country.
This is so well writeen and held my interest all the way through. I could "hear" your concern about your child and helplessness at not being able to do anything to help except call.
I sat glued to the t.v. and crying through all of it, too.
I give you a five because I find nothing wrong and the content is so special. I pray everyone reads it. It would be wonderful if everyone had such a life.
I love the way it flows The transition was so smooth. It did not slow my reading down at all.
Thank you for sharing this. It was a pleasure to read.
Oh, my goodness. How well you describe that feeling. I understand it so well.
This is well written and flows so well.
I do like that after all the despair that you have a plan to put it all back together and move forward. Sometimes, we have to move on even though broken.
Thank you for sharing this. I hope those who need it, find it.
Waht a wonderful story and so well written. I have cats both mine and strays, also. This was such fun to read.
One of mine comes and goes like that and I worry until he shows back up. I have been gone several days and came back yesterday. I have not seen him yet.
Thank you for writing this. It was such fun to read.
This is so well written. I felt like I was right there.
What a wonderful brother you had and what a wonderful way to remmeber him and share him with others. I hope it will encourage others to be like-minded.
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