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Review by Michael Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Nice piece. good conflict and resolution.
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Review by Michael Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a good piece to read. There is some good alliteration that flow gently across the tongue. The only thing in it that might need changing is in the third verse of the first stanza. If they walk at midnight then it is already done nightly so omitting the word nightly is ok.
As a reader I could feel the changing of the season. Thanks.

Michael
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Review by Michael Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very interesting piece. This is a piece that won't allow just one reading.
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