over all I liked this a lot. it was a very nice poem about God's love. the only thing that I really did not understand is the line his God is ours if you are talking about God or Jesus who is God than how can his God be ours. God or Jesus does not have a god because he is God himself just a little confusing. but other then that it was a great poem with a wonderful message Good Job.
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