This short story was a very good adaptation to the original myth of the Siren's. I liked how the main character didn't just jump out to get what he wanted, but he waited. The length could stand to be a little longer, but all in all it was very good. I enjoyed reading it! :) Good job!
wow! This was a great story! The length was really nice...... you are missing some words sometimes, but other than that it was great! A very enjoyable read
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