Wonder who that jerk is that thought she'd have more makeup work than you......that crazy girl. You're right though, she probably does go home and sit in front of the t.v. watching 2 hours of The Office with her sister, then she probably spends the rest of the night reading non-school realated books, not worrying about her homework. I'm sure she's really sorry she ever said that. She probably just didn't understand how truly time consuming your sports are. This is really well written by the way. I think people who do sports like you would be proud to read this and know you're sticking up for them!
Wow, that was seriously really good. It kept me wondering what was going to happen next. You really are an extremly good writer. This sounds like it's written by a profesional. The imagery and details are extremely well written. Now you should write some more of your Fia book..... :] I love the ending by the way. "Go to where there is no light to help me find my regrets." That's deep Manny, real deep. :]
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