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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Jeff,
A nice chilling piece of work. For a short piece I think it had a good balance of description and movement... The only place I think it was a bit rushed, was the reveal of her kids. I would have liked to see a little more dread from her, perhaps her fearing that it was them before the EMT speaks...overall very nice though
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Thank you for entering round 32 of Taboo Temptations. I appologize for the long time judging took.

First let me say wow. the sexual tension between these two really stood out for me. Not just during the sex, which was well written, but throughout the entire piece. It is refreshing to see someone maintain the tension well through the entire story.

Loved the ending, though I would have liked to know how it turned out. Did they get caught? Did they find a way to sneak him out? Does their affair continue?

I also wonder how long Jill has been married and how long she's had an eye on her man's brother.

I am happy to say you have tied for second in this very competitive round.
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