Aww That was such a sweet short story! It told me so much about the characters without even describing them! You know? Like I was unsure who was speaking at the beginning, I thought maybe two siblings, but then it was a husband and wife and you could just hear their love and appreciation for each other in the way they tease and how you added that they giggle and you just added a good amount of mannerisms without actually describing them. I like it!
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