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Review by Miranda D Jones Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great rythym, very powerful. I love it! Gave me chills.
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Review by Miranda D Jones Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
this is a great story, brings me back to my school years! I like the little details thrown in to make it more real. I also liked that you changed metaphors about her cheeks from roses to fire, it shows her growing up, then back to roses (because we all revert back to our little girl ways) A few grammatical errors, but I could still follow. The paragraph about seventh grade seems a bit unorganized compared to the rest of the story. Ending was great, excellent wrap up. I enjoyed reading!
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