Very nice story. I liked how you used the ferret as the main focal point of your story. This story really kept me guessing on what could have happened to Flame til I got to the end. I liked what you chose for the ending of what happened to Flame. I really liked how you used one of our librarians as a character in this story as well as making Andrew the detective. Overall I think you did a really good job with this story.
I totally agree that this is a total disgrace. Some people think that fracking is a harmless activity. What they don't realize is that damage it is doing to the earth and to the life on the earth. This is a very good list of what fracking is doing to the environment. This should really be shown to someone who doesn't have a problem with fracking or someone who wants to learn more about the dangers of fracking.
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