I really enjoyed this poem, very good imagery, as was the point. The detail really explained the emotion very well. i related to every point of imagery,
ive seen and heard and tasted and felt all of the imagery and it really captured it. i also enjoyed the word choices as well, definitely captured the emotion, yet again. Keep up the good work!
I really enjoyed this poem but i felt it lacked in vocabulary variety. Some word choices are somewhat bland and even though i understood its message, i would've liked to see some more intense words to convey the poems gloomy undertones. The format, yet simple, still splits the stanzas into a dark, very emotional, poem.
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