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Review of Until My Release  Open in new Window.
Review by Maylene Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
FIRST IMPRESSION
i loved it
specially this line

Torture in the torment, life inside of death,

PLOT
good, it flowed well

GRAMMAR
also well done

CONCLUSION
keep on writing!
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Review by Maylene Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
FIRST IMPRESSION
I really like this fantasy tale. I wish to read on, and am curious as to why the message was "dragon wings".


PLOT/FLOW
i thought the plot was good. A man gave up his warrior status for his wife and child but now a war threatens the king and he has doubts of returning to his former job. It flowed well.

GRAMMAR
there were a few spelling mistakes, small errors nothing major.

CONCLUSION
i liked it and want more. keep writing.
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Review of Shannon's Gift  Open in new Window.
Review by Maylene Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
i was in tears. i loved this. i saw one spelling error here:

Shannon say it, and went after the poor thing.....and, well......there's no easy way to say this Dan.......but, Shannon was hit by a car!"

i think you mean Shannon saw it


other than that perfection!!!!
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