I like it! (: I'm rather curious as to where the idea came from, but it's a rather brilliant one. I wonder where Santa gained the ability to color things.. (:
First of all, Superman is an extremely cool superhero, so nice job with that! (: Second, your grammar and spelling are positively superb. I didn't see any grammatical or spelling errors in the story, which is rare, especially considering the length. In other words... cool story, bro! (:
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