No wonder you got that good place you got in the compertintion!!!
You have DIFFERENT words in every sentence not the same boring words, you have everything that a marvellous FAMOUS writter needs and if you are hopeing to get somewhere in writing like being famous ( if you arn't already ) you are VERY close!
I loved this and it reminded me of a great kind of similar peice of work that won in a very high classed compertion!
Merry christmas, mayaprue
I didnt really think much effort was put into this peice of work sorry for the doutful comment, is there anything else i could read of yours?
best wishes horselover!
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