IF THIS IS TRULY YOUR STORY, I FEEL FOR YOU AND, CONTINUING TO WRITE IT OUT MAY BE GOOD THERAPY TO RELEASE SOME OF THAT INNER HURT. NOW, YOU SHOULD ALWAYS CHECK YOUR WORK FOR CORRECT GRAMMAR, PUNCTUATION AND SO ON BEFORE POSTING. YOU HAVE SOME SENTENCES THAT ARE RUN ON SENTENCES WHEREAS, A COMMA MAY HAVE BEEN NECESSARY, I COULD BE WRONG. THERE ARE ALSO A FEW SENTENCES THAT SEEM TO HAVE TOO MANY COMMAS. MAYBE, YOU SHOULD USE A GRAMMAR CHECK PROGRAM BEFORE POSTING. BUT, I'M TOTALLY FEELING YOUR STORY AND, YOU DID AND OVERALL GREAT JOB.
THIS PIECE IS DEEP AND TRULY INSIGHTFUL. THERE ARE MANY TIMES WHEN LIFE CAN TAKE OVER AND, GET THE BEST OF YOU. BUT, SOMETIMES IT'S JUST TOO LATE. WELL WRITTEN!
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