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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi,

This is a very interesting and well-thought out piece. Your prose is solid, but I did find one minor error: in the final sentence of the third paragraph, you used "then" when it should have been "than".

Other than that little typo, this is a good piece, very easy to read and thought-provoking.

-Megan
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