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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow ; this story is absolutely amazing. There are a few places you change tenses at. You go from past to present to future. Also there are a few spelling errors. Once or ttwice Hailey was spelled differently then the other times. But over all It was a really good story. It captured my attention from the very beggining.
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