This story is very well written. The mixture of Sci-fi and historical fiction I found fantastic, mixing my favourite era of history with a Doctor Who like explanation to be there. The introduced characters are well explained with believable details to give a sense of historical belonging, as well as a sense of a foreign mentality.
A few spelling mistakes and unintentional heterographs break the natural reading flow at points throughout the story. In the introduction, several characters are briefly introduced with no return or added details, leaving a question in the readers head over their importance (Granted, still a WIP and only a brief introduction to the story).
All-in-all, I found the story very well done and look forward to more to come!
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