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Review by domonique bouty Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
That was a really good beginning.I like how you make it seem all peaceful at first them the one-two punch at the last line.please continue ^_^
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Review by domonique bouty Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wow the end there made me almost read it again lol.Great job! i just have one question.is it a poem or a statement.its very good and kind of makes you wonder "hmmm...does my inner inteligence want cake?"..well thats what it made me think anyway.i loved it keep up the good work ^_^
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Review by domonique bouty Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Love the poem I wish i could go to that school to.I can tell you have a intrest in zombies and the general halloween ghoul populace and it's great how you kinda drew to mind younger zombies and wherewolves going to school.Keep up the good work. ^_^
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Review by domonique bouty Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I loved it,loved it loved it!!! I'm a big fan of fantasy/vampire stories and I believe you captured a pretty good picture and ideal of passion that they are known for having.The details of the setting and emotion were perfect and pull the reader in.Great job and I wish you luck on all your works of this nature
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Review by domonique bouty Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Great parody!I know its hard to find a theme and keep with the original songs rythem so I have to say im very impressed.Love the cow theme very original and actually makes sence.For a first time parody you show potential keep up the good work ^_^.
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