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Review by missmary Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
I love the beginning of this,the concept of a "fixer" who kills to solve problems. The killer as her lover or wanna be lover. That was a twist I didn't see coming . The black car ? Are those his employers? Will we be seeing more of this man? I hope so this will be the best story seris on site. unless you count mine wich you can't see yet because it's not post-able yet
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Review by missmary Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
A neat premise but all u did was rob a bank. Where did the imortality come from? What can't he do now that people have seen him die. one of my fav sci fy tricks is that cant ever stay with the person who saw them die or they end up dying. Does he require special food gimie some thng more then a bank robery. Dont feel bad i made the same mistakes a lot of times before i developed a formula for my writing. its simple who what when where why how and a curveball
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Review by missmary Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I have searched and found your story o my God was that great. I'm comming back to the site after lossing my pass word a while ago and decided to read becuse with only a basic membership i can only have fiveitems up and I'l admit im not so great but this was
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