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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is fantastic! The only thing I noticed was the one period at the end. it seems a bit out of place. I don't know much about poetry though. To others, it probably looks fine. Maybe add a few throughout the poem? I also like how it seems Halloween-ish, but it really has a deeper meaning. That's very clever. Overall, you did a great job on this poem! I can't wait to read more from you! *BigSmile*
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