Is this it the story? I read it and in the end I felt that there is still so much to be said - is there a continuation?
I hope so because I was caught in the story, in his thoughts, in everything.
If this is a open-ending story, congratulations because it's a really good one :)
I loved this short story, is so well written! It made me want to continue to read and read until the end. In the beginning and throughout the history I started to hate her, as she left him behind but in the end we discover that all she did was for love... An amazing story!
I'd love to read more stories written by you and I'm sure I'm going to re-read this one ;)
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