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#4158667

Review of Murphy's Vacation

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Rated: 13+

| (3.0)

cute and humourous. i like it.

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#3697569

Review of Inevitably

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Rated: E

| (3.5)

I think this is an interesting concept, similar to the two mirrors facing each other. Keep writing, and developing this, I like it.

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#3521984

Review of Ode To A Sunflower

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

very wise words. this is a lovely poem and photo

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#3518255

Review of Not a Billabong

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

This isn't just about dialog.. it's also about bullying, a very damaging problem. I like how Karen stands up for herself but violence isn't always the best answer for a problem bully... theres a video on MSN aobut a boy who stands up for himself and he is being punished the same as the bully and what the psycologist says about is has some interesting points... being the victim of bullying, I certainly dreamt of hitting my bully but in the end I beat him by finishing school and not getting down to his level....

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#3503106

Review of Canadian girl at Hogwarts

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Aside from a few typos and grammar glitches, I love the idea of this and I think it would make a great novel.

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#3446355

Review of Cosmogony

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Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

a very interesting concept

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#3420337

Review of God, Who Are You?

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

I find this inspiring. I'm not sure I believe all your theology though but this poem states a nice sentiment.

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#3419269

Review of Gray House

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Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

This is a very inventive story, I like how the first part of the story leads you to believe that Aaron is the true live person. The ballroom gives a hint that maybe all is not as it seems. When Aaron gets home I thought that was the end of the story and was surprised to find there was more. It's a great twist at the end.

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