Nicely done from what we have here. Good ear for dialog except Capt. Kunkle's speech is a little stilted for a cop speaking to one of his own men. Both director and actor friendly, since you give little instructions for either. If you've been through this process before, you know they like that- want to make the project their own and not yours. From the dialog, you're looking for a "R" rating if this was shot, so make sure you give the "R" crowd what they expect otherwise in the balance of the s/p- sex and violence. Wouldn't mind seeing where you went with this, although I'm just an aspiring writer like you and can't help you get this bought. Email is m1946goldberg@yahoo.com.
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