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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am impressed. It's the small things that you sent with my order that showed thoughtfulness. My magnet is now holding up childrens artwork and the other things will be put to good use as well. I appreciate it, thanks
Mark Daniels
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I would like to donate 2,000 gift points to this contest. Maybe in the future I will enter a story but for now I can help.
Thank You
Mark Daniels
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
paralysing (paralyzing)
realise (realize)
in the first paragraph you use the description alien twice, you may want to change one to something else.

I like what you have and would like to read the rest when it's done. I'm hooked already and thats a sign of a good writer. Give 'em a taste so they keep coming back. Hope to read the rest soon, it's an awsome start-- or middle-- or end.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I haven't attempted this contest yet. Your story is very good for being so short. I could not find any mistakes and the topic is something I haven't come across on this site. Different is good in your case.
I did enjoy the super flash fiction piece and I hope to read you again.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hillarious! It started slow and serious, I thought it was going to be boring. I'm glad I kept reading. It was like going up a hill on a rollercoaster and laughing your butt off on the way down the other side. A wonderful story I'm glad I took the time to read it. Thank you
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A fun way to break the monotonous writing. I had fun and will do another when I need another break.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The first sentence is a little confusing to me I think and is it might be isn't it it may sound better.
communication was effective(.)(forgot period)
A nice story very true. You wouldn't believe how many times I talk to my kids and they have a blank stare and didn't hear anything I said. Anyway I liked it give yourself some credit it's pretty good. Hope to read you soon.
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