What I love most about your poem is that it really shows you have potential. Just try to use more your imagination and make connections between abstract and concrete objects. The funkier ,the better.If you want to tell a story use powerful images that can make the reader see through your eyes what you really want to say. Hope you make up soon and come up with a poem in a more merrier tone.
You are a very big supporter of witches, that's quite sure. this poem could become a manifesto for a witches' fan club or something. You are opinionated and that is a positive thing.
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