\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/margie16
Review Requests: OFF
1 Public Reviews Given
1 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review of Puppet  Open in new Window.
Review by Margie 16 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi! I really like this short story!
I like how it has been divided into paragraphs, making it easy to read.
The story line is very interesting, dark dare I say.
Your sentences flow well, I would really like to see more from you! Keep writing, keep creating!

Best wishes,
margie16


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" Open in new Window..
1 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/margie16