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Review of Winter Solitude  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
give me more...please. I want to know what you see. The transition between the beauty of the frozen tundra and its fading is a little abrupt. Give me more.
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Review of Belize! Belize!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I want to know more. Interesting plot.
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Review of The Old Captain  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Reminds me of the book "Ahab's Wife."

Interesting. I can feel the waves and the dread and the fear - and the absolution.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very good...struck a cord...I understand the feelings.

It's ok.

Meg
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Review of for meg  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you.
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Review of Hi Dad...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Interesting...sad...profound...Gave it a 3.5 because I think in the morning when you are fresh you can make it a little more cohesive.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Thought-provoking. Powerful messages within your words.
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Review of Small  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)

very interesting...I like your choice of words...your phrases.

Your inner "madness" appeals to me as I am small also.

But big as life on the outside.

Meg
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Review of The Difference  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Mom always said, "Honey, there's a fine line between love and hate."

Your poem is good...very good... .

Meg
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Review of My painful love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I like this one even better. Work on how to cut out some of your words so your "sentences" are about the same length.

Close your eyes, and go with the flow...you're getting there.

Meg
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Rated: E | (3.0)
My heart floating off in the day...

very good!
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