This essay is really good and inspiring. It actually makes me think about where I am going to when I die. I have lived in a family and life style where people dictate the religious views to me and it is good to think about what is actually out there and you describe it so well
the content is really good and the emotion is what i can see. However it makes me feel depressed when i read this. i would recommend that you write something more cheerful the next time and I am looking forward to reading more of your stories and poetry
I really think that this letter is good and it brings out what you want to do this year. I would just have to say to continue practicing your writing even if you dont have a computer in front of you just with a pen and paper and write. Looking forward to seeing more in the future
I am not a poet but this seems like a really good piece and very well written. I can see a lot of people saying yep I am in his position. I really dont have any pointers for ou
The subject was good but I got distracted with she wore the necklace since it just kept repeating itself. Maybe it was your point to do so but I have to recommend you using more words in the next essay. Good luck
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