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About two months ago our whole family got into a huge Facebook war. I will not get into details but lets just say it wasn't good. The whole family turned against me and my two youngest sisters. We came with understanding and they wouldn't accept any of it. There were assumptions being made.There was name calling and emotional abuse that went into place. They chose to do it in a Facebook group instead of actually talking to us personally. Everyone was talking about us but never once bothered to talk to us. It went on and on and I just couldn't take it anymore. It was getting ugly. We were made out to be the bad guys which in reality we were doing what was right. We were told KARMA was going to get us back. Which I didn't ever pay attention to. I've never believed in such a thing as Karma. I believe things happen as they come. I couldn't take it anymore. I finally just gave it all to God and asked him for guidance in writing them a final reply. I cried out to the Lord and prayed. I asked him to help me. He was with me the whole time I was writing. Before I submitted it, I received a message from a sister I haven't seen or talked to in years. It was one of those chain messages. Now those I've never participated in. Many friends have sent me those throughout the years and I have always ignored them. I almost closed her message just as soon as I realized what it was. But something got into me to keep reading. It was talking about Karma and angels. I had some sort of audial vision the night before as I was drifting off to sleep. All I heard was in the arms of an angel. When I read the message I automatically remembered what I heard the night before and linked it to the message. I knew with this God was telling me something. I hadn't heard the song in a very long time and it was just weird for it to pop up in my head like that. I went ahead and sent the message to my family. I went on with my day like usual. I was happy all day and couldn't stop thinking about it. Later something come upon me and I just had to look the lyrics up. I knew that all I knew in the song was in the arms of an angel fly away from here and I just had to know the rest of the song. When I got home I looked them up and I couldn't believe my eyes. I got chills as I noticed everything was about me and my current situation. Everyone that knows me knows I follow my husband to his jobs and we stay in a hotel. It was dark and cold as my husband and son were already asleep and I decided to go to bed as well. I finally pieced it all together. Although I don't believe in karma or chain messages God used the message my sister sent me to speak through me. Where it said I sent you an angel last night. It was God letting me know he sent me an angel.
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About two months ago our whole family got into a huge Facebook war. I will not get into details
,but let
's just say it wasn't good. The whole family turned against me and my two youngest sisters. We
came with understanding
and they wouldn't accept any of it. There were assumptions being made. There was name calling and emotional abuse
that went into place. occurred. They chose to do it in a Facebook group instead
of talking to us
,personally. Everyone was talking about us but never once bothered to talk to us. It went on and on
.and I just couldn't take it anymore. It was getting ugly. We were made out to be the bad guys which in reality we were doing what was right.
We were told KARMA was going to get us back. Which I didn't ever pay attention to. I've never believed in such a thing as Karma. I believe things happen as they come. I couldn't take it anymore. I
,finally
, just gave it all to God
. I and asked him for guidance in writing them a final reply. I cried out to the Lord and prayed. I asked him to help me. He was with me the whole time I was writing. Before I submitted it, I received a message from a sister I haven't seen or talked to in years. It was one of those chain messages. Now
, those I've never participated in. Many friends have sent me those throughout the years
,usually
, I've always ignored them. I almost closed her message just as soon as I realized what it was. But something
got into told me to keep reading. It was talking about Karma and angels. I had some sort of audial vision the night before as I was drifting off to sleep. All I heard was in the arms of an angel. When I read the message I automatically remembered what I heard the night before and linked it to the message. I knew
with this God was telling me something. I hadn't heard the song in a very long time and it was just weird for it to pop up in my head like that. I went ahead and sent the message to my family.
I went on with my day like usual. I was happy all day and couldn't stop thinking about it. Later something come upon me
, and I just had to look the lyrics up. I knew that all I knew in the song was 'in the arms of an angel fly away from here'
and I just had to know the rest of the song. When I got home I looked them up
. and I couldn't believe my eyes. I got chills as I noticed everything was about me and my current situation. Everyone that knows me knows I follow my husband to his jobs and we stay in a hotel. It was dark and cold as my husband and son were already asleep
.and I decided to go to bed as well. I
,finally
, pieced it all together. Although
, I don't believe in karma or chain messages God used the message my sister sent me to speak through me. Where it said I sent you an angel last night. It was God letting me know he sent me an angel.
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I loved how open you were about your faith in God
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