i wish your piont can be very understood by all. it's funny how life treats us, the mysteries and puzzles. what you stated is quite true and those people were great men. but next time try to talk about what you think about those sayings to make it kinda of your own. keep up the great work.
I think it's very good especially how you started. you know it has enough suspense making you want to read more, just to know what you would do and that's very good. In the middle, you gave good reflections on how you felt about millionaires and the reality of not being one. you've got good punctuations, keep up the good work.
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