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Rated: E | (4.0)
I really like this poem. It's fun and cheery and reminds me of the vibe that the song Kokomo gives me.

However, it does feel a bit rough, which might be because of the rhythm of the poem changing with every line. I'm also not a big fan of abab style rhyme, but I also admonish myself for using aabb all the time. An abab rhyme pattern does allow for a lot more flexibility in the poem.

I'll be saving this one for when I want a motivational read!
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