WOW!!!!!!!!! This poem is so creative, and really let's a person get to know you. I always think that thats one of the most important aspects when writing. To be able to create a passageway from one mind to another, and i believe you know exactly what i mean!
~Mallory
This poem is ... touching! Really!!! I mean its amazing, it paints a very clear picture in my mind!!!! Please keep writing, pieces like this are a good way of showing a person other parts of life, of the world and truly see into the mind of another.
~Mallory
This poem was inspiring and i always appreciate a sincere attempt to convey beauty.
I really like how it makes you think and it leaves you with a warm fuzzy feeling. I notice no grammatical or spelling mistakes. I really like this poem. Great Job!
~Mallory
This poem was sweet, i could easily see this poem in a childrens book. I really love poems that are simple and light, fun. This is excatly the kind of thing that could rock a child to sleep, or give them a few laughs. Like I said very very sweet!!
~Mallory
How true!!! This poem is really... witty and i appreciate the message. I really love the last sanza and think the whole poem is summed up perfectly with those words. I really think that it's awesome when someone can be okay with critism and be okay with not always being in control. Great Job!!!
~Mallory
Wow!! That poem is great, really. It was just so intelligent and witty. It was somewhat humorus, and i had a few good laughs. I thought the last part was amazing and summed up the poem nicely. I only have on suggestion, the first stanza, the meter seemed a tad broken, maybe if you fixed the syllables it would be even better.
Great Job, and Merry Christmas
~Mallory
I really love this poem. I appreciate how short it is, how you get right to the point. Yet it's just as meaningful and powerful. I don't think there was grammatical, or spelling errors. I also really liked the title, really get's your attention. Short and Sweet!!
Merrry Christmas!
~Mallory
This short story was... powerful. We aren't always as thankful as we should be when it comes to a brand new baby born perfectly healthy, publish this and that may start to change. I liked the briefness of this story, the words bittersweet come to mind. I noticed no mistaked and just wanted to tell you how awesome i think this is!!
Merry Christmas
~Mallory
This poem was interesting. I really liked the message and the meaning, it's just the way some of the lines were arranged that threw me for a second. Like I said the poem itself is great just maybe read through it a few times to yourself, and you could agree with me.
Great Job
~Mallory
Well firstly this poem is beautiful. I'm not usually a fan of wilderness sports, but the way you described it was beautiful. I really enjoyed your word choice, it really painted vivid pictures in my head, and gave me a clear idea of what you were trying to convey!! Good Job!!
~Mallory
This poem is interesting and i really like the message behind it. I also really aprreciate the wit behind the writting and can appreciate the metaphors. I don't see any spelling mistakes and grammer seems great. This poem also leaves clear images from the excellent word choice.
~Well Done
Wow!! How rude of that woman! This piece of writing really makes you think of how unappreciative people can be, and makes you think of how thankful you want to be. I know that when i give somebody a gift a lot of work goes into it, and it sounds like you and i have that in common. Your article was well written and interesting. I also enjoyed the meaning behind it!
~well done and Merry Christmas!!!
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