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Review of Jaden  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This story has great bones. Some of the sentences appear to have little purpose, for example 'Sam did not give a reason for wanting to take me home, he just asked whereas Jaden did.' and its a bit wordy in parts, nothing a great edit can't fix tho. There is a bit of a Twilight feel too, so I am looking forward to being suprised soon. Great work.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
really nice melody to this piece, wistful, i like it :)
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Review of Ciara's Poem  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
There is a poignancy here that resonated with me. I really like the styling of this poem. The imagery was spot on, thank you
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Review of Modern Babel  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the pace and tempo of this piece, and I love how it shows how big and small we are as a race.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I loved this, it took a while for the story to grab me, but when it did I got lost in the moment, thank you
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