At the beginning of the poem before we knew the man and woman were both feediing Boots I felt curiosity and amusement coming from him while he watched Sammy. When he spoke of his family who left him I literally felt my heart pull. When he said he doesnt remember his name I could imagine the wistful hurt in his voice. When it got to the part when he was speaking to the man and woman I could feel how alone he felt and the want that was in him for family and love. You did a wonderful job at making me feel. Thank you for sharing.
Oh how I wish I meet this man. I love the line "The strands of devotin to a higher ideal". A very beautiful line. I really enjoyed your ending. I was almost like you were saying something that is simply known. I could hear someone saying this in a very calm subtle voice. To me it comes across more powerful that way. Good job.
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