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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well this was really good can't imagine why you don't have a rating. Anyway I'd like you to kep it up, you can definitely write and I think I might know. You do have some areas to improve I think. If he can't remember and he see wings in a reflection would it not be that he would be a bit more hesitant to fly and also to help someone he does not know or even remember? Keep up the good owrk once again
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