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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I liked this. I felt like I was right there. You captured every moment.
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Review of Prison of Defeat  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Yes it will have risen from the prison of defeat. It's just ashes and they're still hot.
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Review of Darkness  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Loved it. It describes so much about life in short sentences. I especially love the end. "Was it ever lit?"
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Review of Where's Dad?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
How beautiful. This is an amazing illustration of what we go through when taking care of our aged parents. My mom could only remember her childhood but it was a beautiful story that I had never heard before. The things we can miss out on when we put them under someone else care.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh I like the mystery here. The opening line about the

greedy sailor really tells an enchanting tale here.

I gather that he is ripping off the business so he can

live his lavish lifestyle with fast woman, and he hates

himself for the things he must do to get ahead.

He then kills himself and the diver finds his body.

that's my version. But still I love this. Well done.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Another hit with me. I loved Johnny Cash and I really enjoyed his last song, Hurt.

It was always something about him and I think this is an honorable tribute to a great soul.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Aww I love this writing Great job on this. I can tell you put a lot of feeling in this and that's the kind of things i like to read about.

Keep up the good work.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Nice.
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Review of Dreams  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Aww this is so sweet. I love the word, "womb-mate." I can envision as if I were there.
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