Wow, this seems like a great idea! I was wondering, are you just going to give advice to aspiring writers or are you going to give ideas for writing? If so, I'd love some advice on staying focused and keeping up a writing schedule. Thanks sos much for reading my comment! :)
Great! I felt like I was in the diner with you, watching those people. I could imagine them clearly. Though I haven't been in the same situation as most, I still see these same groups everyday. The feelings portrayed in this story were amazing. Keep writing!! :)
Wow. I really loved the way you surprised us with revealing that you're a woman. The way you set the whole thing up was very vivid and real. I felt like I was hearing it first hand or watching it happen, you are amazing at describing things. In short, I loved it!
i thought it was great, but think it may have too much detail. the detail is great but limit yourself a little and this work will be five stars definitely!
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