This is an amazing poem! I have thought the same thing you have while i was stargazing. I really enjoyed reading it. I don' have any advice to give you of improvement, because I wouldn't change a thing about this poem. You are a wonderful poet and I look forward to reading more of your writings.
Keep Writing
~Mello
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