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Review by Lev Zelenin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I like it. It is rather abstract to me, but the open ended-ness and word choice make for a nice read. Only suggestion I have is to work on continuity.

Thank you for sharing.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
I love this. Real nostalgic. Do carry any feelings of guilt toward your mother? I felt that on a couple of stanzas. Good topic, good flow. I would recommend using semicolons more, but really this is superflous and someone like me who doesn't even bother to edit can't criticize such things. In short, deep and sound poetry that doesn't try to force itself but instead comes easy as a creek.

Thank you for sharing,

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Its great to see this kind of devotion. I'm in the group, but I rarely visit this site. How do I know who to review? And how do I get myself up for review? I'd be glad to help if I can.
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