I actually enjoyed reading this. Was the 200 words a maximum? I would have liked to read a tiny bit more about what happened after the boy told the king of his plans up until how the story ended, possibly a bit more about the winter witches. Overall though, it was very well written and I look forward to reading more of your work! :)
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